…are up at Adventures In YA and Children’s Publishing. Available here, embarrassing typos and all. I’ll be responding to the long, very kindly and constructive critique already left by editor Susan Sipal (she nailed each and every one of the bloody typos – that’ll teach me not to use a laptop to proof read instead of printing it out) later when I’m home from work.
Meanwhile, if any regular readers want a taste of what I’ve been making all this fuss about, now’s your chance to tackle the first five 1250 words. Which may well be all you need.